This little composition is inspired from the evocative post — “Missing” — by Suzanne Leitz; borrowing words and feelings from her. It’s a tribute to her feelings, and her strength; and to the poignant yet tranquilizing memories of my brother whom I lost.
When you lose someone
a part of yourself goes missing
that can never be reclaimed
Try as you much
to go on
but the hole
is always there
making you feel so maimed
You do happen
to catch
moments of joy
but it’s never without
a fleeting feeling
of being disdained
Her favorite clothes
hidden away
in that secret drawer
you press your face into them
in a bid to catch
the long faded scent
The futility of it all
hits you bluntly
the helpless tears
tear up the pent up longing
And your soul
along with her clothes
gets stained
The family picture
looks so incomplete
though she too is there
on the wall
just next to it
separately framed
Sweeter the memories
stronger is the pain
traveling the agonizing path
back n forth
with despair and anguish
your core being consumed and claimed
Why couldn’t I do
something to save her
absurdly you accuse
yourself
and feel ashamed
Missing someone
so dearly
so heart wrenching
it feels sad
it feels good
the despairing sweet memories
a treasure
to be held on to
of feelings
oxymoronically strained
For it’s not humanly possible
for the pain to fade away…
preserve the feelings
& the memories
So palpable
Nurse them.. savour them..
slowly.. softly
Live with them
Hold on to them– as her part
Don’t stop them
don’t try to be rid of
Let them flow
through you, untamed.
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I love it! I love the way you have taken a few of my phrases and rearranged them and redecorated them and added to them. I’m honored.
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Thanks… For such empathetic acceptance…N wholehearted appreciation. I’m touched. Thanks a million😊
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I had tears in my eyes reading it.. and that says it all..it brought so many memories back ..of the loss which we all suffer at some point in life.
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And I had tears in mine while writing it… The words touch some raw nerve inside
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Beautiful 🙂
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Thanks😊
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I’m sorry for your loss.
Losing someone so close to us is never easy.
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Yes… It’s never easy. The pain doesn’t fade with time, just that you learn to live with it.
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Exactly.
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